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Hi Y, Below is my assessment of your essay based on the CP Rubric. It is clear that your paper is about the negative environmental effects of the war in Gaza, but there are some major issues with source integration and citation. You do not quote from your sources directly, which creates confusion about which ideas are your own and which are the ideas of your sources. Some of your internal citations do not match up with the sources listed in your Works Cited page. In order to receive a passing grade on the paper, you must revise & resubmit, ensuring that 1) you quote directly from sources, 2) integrate those quotations into your own writing and 3) correctly format internal citations and works cited entries according to MLA formatting. I will give you three days to revise the paper. Attached is the pdf with my comments — you will have to open it in Adobe. Best, Claire
Exposition of a problem: Good/Very Good
Body of research: Non-passing
Organization: Very Good
Evidence: Non-passing
Language: Very Good
MLA formatting: Non-passing i just need you to correct these errors and you don’t need to rewrite the whole paper you will need to open this document in adobe maybe to see the comments
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